Another flash

Hi dear readers!
I have this story I call "Operation Aorta". I got a flash of a scene for it one day.

"I could tear Karen's hair out one by one," Jane said.
"Why on earth?"
"She tries to steal Mark from me! I won't let her do that! Mark has told me I am the one he wants, and I am going to fight for my man."

Let's write some more, shall we?

Crazy characters!

Hi dear readers!
I have tried to write a story I have titled "Bearditch House". I thought I had all the characters I needed. All of sudden this woman called Karen Lake demanded, that she must get space from page. I have no idea what her part would be. I know for sure she does not fit into the story. And neither does Jane Snake fit in either. So I thought I will give them a story of their own, a story in which they can be present. Right now I am thinking of this:

- The 1st chapter is written from Sue Elk's POV.
- Sue Elk meets Raul Lane during that chapter
- Could the 2nd chapter be from Raul's POV?

If no one protests, I think I will do it like that. The third chapter could be Irina's POV...or then not. I don't know yet.

Let's write some more, shall we?

CC really helps

Hi, dear readers!
I have joined on CC. CC = Critique Circle. It is good community. It has helped me a lot. Some of its members told me that I must add description to one of my stories. In the backburner of my mind I had been thinking the same even before I submitted that story to crit. So, if they agree with me...I think I'll add that description. But where? I mean...a description can't be just splashed somewhere and decide 'okay, now it is good'. It must be put so that the reader is on map. I think I have quite a mountain ahead of me...but I think I can go over it.

I still keep copying

Hi!
Copying keeps going. I am on page 115, and the book is still "Banker".

More copying

Hi!
I may have told you I copy a book. Oh yes. The Banker. That's the name of it. I copy it to understand the plot and the structure things. The page I am on...its number is 70. Let's hope I get further in the future.

Copying goes on

Hi!
I still keep copying. It feels like...it is the only way to understand the structure of a story. Soundsd odd, I know. But that is the way it is. If you want to know why, I'd give you one advice. Think of the painters of the old times. Their apprentices...they did the same to understand how to paint and such. That is what I am trying to do with my writing.

I am still copying that Banker - book. And the page is 69 for now.

Copying goes on

Hi!
I keep copying. The reason is I want to understand what to put in and what to leave out. The book I am copying is called "Banker".